I see life
Like a Tapestry
Were you weave
In and out of life
As the journey unfolds
Each thread
Inter woven in your dreams
Have vibrant colours
That burst into being
That burst into life
Then often as in life
You have the black
Grey and white
The hidden nightmares
The hidden dreams
The shadows of life
The beauty of it all
Is how each thread
Intertwines its way through life
Each colour vibrant
With each thread you sew
Even the shadows
Bring out the colours
On a tapestry of Gold
You have an impressive command of structurral movement...Enjoyed the flow and storyline as well...~FjR~
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Extremely well presented, every word resonated with perfect cadence and emotion, I love each stanza especially the fourth, and you really shouldn't complain about the last line it works wonderfully, and you should not change it let it stand on its own. A favourite of yours.