two birds are flying
flapping and playing in flight
by tangerine sky
to reach horizon of love
making journey momentous
A wonderful journey of love so beautifully crafted and depicted. The superb imagery of this write made me at close range with these lovely birds. A great Tanka.
Flight! ! ! Journey! Flying away. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Lovely poem. Two birds playing in the air on their way to love land.
To reach horizon of love making journey momentous...wow so wonderful
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Great imagery rejoicing the reader's mind with the fantastic flight of two love-laden birds. Thanks. Asim ji.