Yes, you can freeze time
Because it stops completely
When you can't see her
And passes in a second
Every time you do see her!
Such brilliant piece! Ingenious idea and effortless execution.
A brilliant tribute to Tina I'm sorry for making you cry but I thought of her she was lucky
A good write David! Wrote my first one earlier on, it's on here called Love x
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Such a great Tanka, David! And such a great tribute to eternal love!