Tangled Ropes................. Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Tangled Ropes.................

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AHAB, ok, who took my milk.
STARBUCK, wasnt me.
AHAB, probly the same one
who took my ice cream.
STARBUCK, look captian, about
that white whale.
AHAB, what about it,
STARBUCK, are you taking your
break down drugs,
AHAB, why are you asking?
STARBUCK, well to start with,
your wearing no clouths, and,
seeing ghost.
AHAB, who took my playing cards, ?
STARBUCK, wasnt me, .
AHAB, every time i ask you, you
give me a funny look,
STARBUCK, thats becouse im in
love with you,
AHAB, your fired..........................

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COMEDY CENTRAL ON THE HIGH SEAS NO LESS, IS THAT THE GIG HERE, DAVID? AMUSING PEN...A POET W/NO SENSE OF HUMOUR, REGARDLESS OR HOW SERIOUS A STYLE OF WRITING PERSUADES THEM, IS A POET W/ NO LOGIC OR DIVERSITY... NICE WRITE, DAVID'''''''''''FRANK...10!

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COMEDY CENTRAL ON THE HIGH SEAS NO LESS, IS THAT THE GIG HERE, DAVID? AMUSING PEN...A POET W/NO SENSE OF HUMOUR, REGARDLESS OR HOW SERIOUS A STYLE OF WRITING PERSUADES THEM, IS A POET W/ NO LOGIC OR DIVERSITY... NICE WRITE, DAVID'''''''''''FRANK...10!

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David Gerardino 24 November 2005

READ SLOW..............

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