Take me to Paradise where dreams come true.
Take me to Paradise and make me a woman.
Take me to Paradise where my joy knows no bounds.
Take me to Paradise where ecstasy awaits me.
Take me to Paradise, where tales of sweetness is told.
Take me to Paradise, where my soul yearn for.
Take me to Paradise where I will find myself.
Take me to Paradise so I may drink from the well of sweetness.
Take me to Paradise, where angels tread.
Take me to Paradise that I may be complete.
Take me to Paradise, where every woman's dreams come true.
Take me to Paradise, a haven not for the faint hearted.
Take me to Paradise, the mountain of pleasure.
Take me to Paradise, where my treasure lies.
Take me to Paradise, in my theatre of dreams.
© *UCHE NWANZE*
25: 08: 2020
Good poem. My only suggestion, if you please, is that you use the phrase " Take me to paradise" in the first and last lines and let all the other float in between for impact Take me to paradise, where dreams come true And make me a woman ================= ================== My theatre of dreams Take me to paradise I think this way its...boom!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Thank you so much for your candid suggestion and your vivid comments.