Swells Of The Canyon Poem by Susan Lacovara

Swells Of The Canyon

Rating: 4.7


I lost my heart to a man
of the ocean
Sunlit gold locks, fell in waves
such, the sea
His voice, like the gulls, shrieked
with passion's emotion
Raised up his mast and set sail
far from me

I kept my heart anchored safe
to his mooring
Starboard, steadfast steering
'neath skies, thunderous red
Storms came to pass, and his soul
went exploring
Like seashells, I collected
what words, went unsaid...

I cast my heart out, not far
from his rigging
Given content, I, being caught up
in his net
Gone with the gales, forsaken
forgiving
What swells in the canyons of
a maiden's regret

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(02/21/14) Still caught in the outgoing current, he sails off into the canyons of the coast. BC & SK...what tales that could be told, if but on a different shore. She wishes safe voyage, clear skies, smooth sailing, Godspeed...that he might return to her port, one day...'Til then, she harbors love, and it's distant horizon.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mervyn Graham 03 March 2014

A wise poet once wrote.... How can my poor heart be glad, When absent from my sailor lad; How can I the thought forego- He's on the seas to meet the foe? Let me wander, let me rove, Still my heart is with my love; Nightly dreams, and thoughts by day, Are with him that's far away. I can see you with hanky in hand waving from the dockside... my poor lass you've been through the wringer. (hope you know what a wringers is)

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Anthony Burkett 22 February 2014

To cast our net of wishes upon a sea of desire... and for that sea to swallow it whole... we wonder why.

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Lynn Anne Brown 22 February 2014

Lovely Poem, strong imagery that pulls the heart out to meet the mind.

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