Sweet Rapture Poem by Violet Val

Sweet Rapture

Rating: 5.0


Face to face
Do I dare?
Standing so close
Toe to toe

About to do something I did not dare before
A decade has passed since I last stole a glance

Of you

And now
I gather the courage
Pull you in close
Kiss your lips and hid my hands under your clothes

You returned the gesture
Peeling me out of any self control

Driving and guiding you closer
In every strike of our hips
a spark is released
Sparks that fuel the fire deep inside

Enduring with delight
Your bites and the reward of your warm breath
on my skin
All while I write a love note on your back
so that part of me may go with
you

Suddenly
We are consumed entirely
By the aura of our fire
Extending, intertwining, and helplessly trying to find gravity
Time stands still

Once freed from rapture
All that is left
Is my longing to admire
You

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 09 June 2009

'Extending, intertwining, and helplessly trying to find gravity Time stands still' Beautiful sweet love experience nicely expressed.

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sensual... sexy... niceeeeeee

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Violet V 29 October 2013

Thank you! A brief look into my soul... I have been away but I have returned more inspired than ever!

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Aldo Kraas 03 March 2010

That poem alone is excelent. And I give you a 10

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~ Jon London ~ 13 June 2009

Outstanding write, expression at its finest...your words of longing...the heart so filled with love....well penned

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 June 2009

The writes of your lifetime............endeavoured a masculine adrenalins.I juz luviit!

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Bhaswat Chakraborty 09 June 2009

'Once freed from rapture All that is left Is my longing to admire You' May I add... 'And you are the essence of my being within and beyond sensuality! ' You are a natural and powerful poet. 10+

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