Sweet Addiction Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Sweet Addiction

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When you asked about me
from the flowers today
in the afternoon, did they
tell you that I was looking
for you among them?
From the happy bird I
learnt a tune of love
to sing, stories I told
the little boy who
was selling gum about
the things I did in love.
Did the soft evening
breeze give you the kiss
it snatched from me?
Did the colors of the
sunset show you the
picture I painted
in the sky around
the clouds and
all these friends
who know us smile
in understanding
because we know
life is an uneasy
compulsion and your
love sweet addiction.

Sequel to the poem Uneasy compulsion by poet Sadiqullah Khan

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mark Nwagwu 11 November 2008

I want to bury myself in my fiction-prose and there tell stories on stories, endless stories of my people, of Africa, in the new age, now the Obama age. But your poetry, your mode of expression, is a magnet pulling me into poetry, more and more, into thoughts that don't come out in words. (Neruda has done this already; but I'm still fighting him) 'You asked about me from the flowers today, in the afternoon, what did they tell you I must quickly return to my prose-fiction or, I'll just sit by the seaside of your evocative poems and not write again Mark

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Roger Cornish 04 November 2008

Wonderful imagery and a softness, a lightness to cherish..... Almost mystical.... keep writing. Rx

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Sadiqullah Khan 01 November 2008

The Night Is Half Over The spell of your love The soothing ways when I searched Myself in the autumn and wilderness The crescent moon which had caught Red from the sunset as if from your frock The enchantment of the evening is to continue The tavern is there in the street of Khayyam The saki has returned and lo the first goblet Leave alone” loneliness of ages” for I know The sage with his advice and the keeper of the order The city was empty for the enchantment was dead In the temple of love when your silhouette did appear In dark and mysterious and with steps of the dance Cup after cup saki the evening’s going down Before the sunrise in the cold silver of the morning How shall I leave the tavern my love Like mercury your lips swerve for the story Say it not for I read it in your eyes Keep the red lips for a day when the tavern Of my heart is empty and the pitcher gone dry Dry shall it never be it your lips Cup after cup from the sadness in my heart I want to drink like passion of Rumi Broken have I bond with the beloved What a magician this love is unto me Drunk are thou from the passion of thy love Sleep in the tavern for the night is half over

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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