Surprises surprise us
They seem to come from nowhere
They lie hidden in some corner
Come all of a sudden
To catch us unawares
They give us
so many moments
of pleasure
Speaking the words of love and
springing from
a true heart
A surprise
took me over
Suddenly welled up
my tears
They flowed without check
When in the voice of my love
They said
I am here, I am here
It surprised me
When it came
stealthily from behind
Putting hands on my eyes
Asked
Tell me who am I, who am I?
Oh surprises surprise me
When they come in different colors
And merge into one
And become indistinguishable
From each other.
A unique theme that took me by surprise .Enjoyed the flow. Thanks
We enjoy surprises if it is a long cherished one When it came stealthily from behind Putting hands on my eyes, asked tell me who am I, who am I? beautiful penning
Surprises surprise us They seem to come from nowhere They lie hidden in some corner Come all of a sudden To catch us unawares They give us so many moments of pleasure Speaking the words of love and springing from a true heart.....so touching and impressive with true vision. Beautiful poem.10
Merge into one! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Thanks for guiding my imagination to picture many-colored surprises coming together- no longer intermittent- to become a state of constant wonder.
Life is really full of surprises. It surprises me how this humble poem can touch the hearts of great poets
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Truly, surprises come suddenly from nowhere and surprise us with its immense pleasure or disapproval.Loved reading your poem.
Thank you for your nice comments.