Sun Moods Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

Sun Moods

Rating: 4.8


Rising golden, setting red,
I saw the sun receive and abandon
This world many times.
And between with a myriad of moods,
From light to shadow,
And from glisten to gloom,
It reigned; so that now I cannot separate
The feelings that rose from within -
That were a result of my internal storm -
And those that seeped in with the light.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sue Ann Simar 16 May 2009

I especially like lines two and three.

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Susan Jarvis 09 May 2009

Pathetic fallacy at its best! Some excellent alliteration in a poem conveying 'a myriad of moods' with an eloquent flourish. S :)

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