Sun Light Hits The Water..... Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Sun Light Hits The Water.....

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SLACK tides, smooth edges,
metal eyelets, drifting
in the cold snow.
MAN overboard,
man overboard,
CLIFFS and rocks, pitch
and plunge, a drum getting
louder, as you stagger off.
MAN overboard,
man overboard,
DEPTHS and weights,
ghost and saints.
a child waiting for
his father to love
him, as his son.
MAN overboard,
man overboard.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ruby Root 04 October 2006

Sad poem David but very creative. Excellent write.

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YOU SET AN INTREPID STAGE HERE, MY GOOD FRIEND...STRONG IMAGERY CARRYS A WELL CRAFTED WORK TO THE FINISH LINE FOR A 10...''''''''FRANK

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