Sun Poem by Abdul Razaq

Sun

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moving all the time
lovely sun
no matter, feels happy
still moving
ro reason, feels sorrow
but going on
neither tired nor bore
leading ahead
always brighten every thing
without discrimination
sometimes display anger
warms every object
when clouds come, hide itself
can, t find it
awaken up, all creatures
without greed
rain, hot sun or storm
comes in time
after the long day, at sunset
alarm to sleep
morning voice work, work and work
tells the world
everyone waits, at sunrises
message of hope
goes on, goes on and so on...........
have ambitions
never ignore its duty
so sincere
gives colours to flowers
red, white and blue
source of energy for plants, animals and human beings
just imganes it
hardworking, honest and punctual
with its commitment
we can say it
guiding star
examples for us
to follow

abdulrazaq
17th march 2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Katherine Wiley 17 March 2008

Abdul-Your poem is very nice. I think you can learn to write poetry, if you will pay close attention to it, and make corrections. I enjoyed your poem. kat I am sending you a message, too

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Melvina Germain 18 March 2008

A lovely write abdul, you clearly identify the true qualities of the sun. I know that English is not your mother tongue, never-the-less you did a great job, I enjoyed the read Abdul, thankyou.

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Greenwolfe 1962 04 April 2008

There is no doubt now, that we have a philosopher in our midst now. GW62

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xxxxx xxx 03 April 2008

masallah akhi keep it up inshallah!

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Shiza Khan 28 March 2008

i like the poem.. it contain the hope for everyone to live. :)

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Mitta Xinindlu 26 March 2008

I like the poem. keep writing

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Emancipation Planz 23 March 2008

Refreshingly ra ra ra! ! ! ! I have a baby niece and family in PM... I hope the stars will guide me to visit one day soon.

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Abdul Razaq

Abdul Razaq

faisalabad, pakistan
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