Summer Rain Poem by Tan Pratonix
Summer Rain
Like a summer rain she fell
That hot September hour
And caught unawares he was drenched,
He lost all power
Of thinking clearly, went giddy,
Shook -
Shaking within him the citadel of equanimity
To a rubble.
'I would go
Through a hundred times as strong rain,
A thousand times such trouble
(She was uncommon) ,
If over the ruins of my equanimity
She will build a new strength
Of love, or she is no woman! '
I can see and feel this. Very descriptive. I enjoyed reading this. I agree with Charles' assessment.It's beautiful. L
excellent work! I loved it from start to finish...pen on! Always, Amberlee
a very well written poem of the heart with great flow and imagery well done my friend.
A beautiful and intriguing work. The imagery is just absolutely captivating. Bravo!
Great poem Tan, I enjoyed reading it, and particularly liked the reference to the woman being like summer rain, best wishes Lynda
Very nice Tan, I like the feel of this poem, definitely a (10) from me. Melvina
Powerful expression! 17-19 you say? Wow.... Let me read the other numbered entries.: _)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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a beautiful and powerful narrative of love the image created sticks in the reader's mind total immersion in the wonder of water a fine poem