Suddenly Poem by Joyce Hemsley

Suddenly

Rating: 5.0


Poetic Form - Rictameter.
Syllable count -
two-four-six-eight-ten
and return.

Shining
Spanish island
is where we were going.
when red vintage wine was flowing
and beautiful sparkling eyes were glowing.
But 'suddenly' your health declined
veils of haze hid the sun
lovelight never
Shining

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
James B. Earley 22 August 2009

A poignant composition, beautifully executed!

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Joyce Hemsley

Joyce Hemsley

Portsmouth England
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