Subterranean Monsters Poem by Shaun Cronick

Subterranean Monsters

Rating: 5.0


People say I'm crazy.
But I haven't the time.
What time is it?
Been living down here about four years.
Give or take a couple of months.
It's hard to keep track.
I can't remember all that good.
Since my accident.
About four years ago.
Give or take a couple of months.
It's hard to keep track.
I can't remember all that good.
What time is it?
Doctors said I'll never really fully mend.
Only slightly.
Bruised brain and all that.
Not firing properly.
I might repeat things.
I feel safe down here rather than up there.
But there's danger down here too.
The monsters.
They're down here.
They exist.
People say I'm crazy.
But I haven't the time.
What time is it?
I gotta go.
I gotta go.
There's a monster coming.
There's a monster coming.
And it stops and devours people.
They don't scream at all.
None of them.
And then it moves on.
Day and night I see it all,
The monsters and people.
The monsters and people.
Day and night I see it all.
What time is it?
I gotta go.
I gotta go.
There's a monster coming.
I need to hide.
Go up the escalator.
Hide in the toilets.
There's a monster coming.
Can't you hear it.
Can't you hear it.
There's a monster coming.
After it feeds and passes,
I can make it to the Waterloo line.
I use the tunnels.
It's quieter there this time of night.
People say I'm crazy.
But I haven't the time.
What time is it?
I gotta go.
I gotta go.
There's a monster coming.

Tuesday, August 4, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: mental illness
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 22 August 2020

The man's compulsion to keep moving, his obsessive fears, his avoidance of human engagement, his honest admission of sickness... all of these are hauntingly captured in his own voice. Gives me chills. A 10;

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Dominic Windram 05 August 2020

Superb paranoid poem Shaun. I like the way it builds dramatically. The monster is a clever personification of paranoia. It's a very frightening ten from me!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 04 August 2020

An excellent write on mental illness. Beautifully crafted and vividly depicted. A one of a kind dramatic monologue woven by a versatile and brilliant Poet. To my Poem List.

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