Sto-O-P ! Poem by Tsira Gogeshvili

Sto-O-P !

Rating: 5.0


Lonely the tree
rustles at top,
and the black cloud
warns: sto-o-p...
The Eremite cannot
world rescue,
the storm sings about
thunder approach!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidyadhar Durgekar 04 June 2008

Few words woven nicely so many things about life.NIce write

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Roland Bastien 04 June 2008

I read this poem several times, each time, I ended with tale vision. I must be wrong- perhaps a spasm of thaugh-

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David Harris 07 June 2008

Tsira, so much said in so few words. Wonderfully written. Top marks and thanks for sharing them my friend. David

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 07 June 2008

Good poetic work.Small and sweet with adequate metaphor and diction I like it very much.my 10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 28 August 2008

This short poem is beautiful.

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Rema Prasanna 01 July 2008

Precise brilliant work... storm swirls from clouds or tree branches.... I am sure it is from your lines... I can hear... Good one Tsira Rema

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 14 June 2008

Hello Tsira, Loyd here. Loved your poem, your profile and personality. Good work my poet friend. Please visit my poems when you can and thank you, L C Taylor

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Malini Kadir 14 June 2008

I truly admire this write of yours, thanks for sharing......

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Kesav Easwaran 11 June 2008

yes...a good warning this...and a mind boggling one at that. good work

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