Static Poem by Amanda Elizabeth Sanchez

Static

Rating: 3.5


Be static, be still as forgiveness unveils. It's the truth which murmurs quietly until, we realized it fails.
Do not forget nor regret but be silent and discrete. Be calm in an instant, time will reveal the consistency of thoughts in defeat.
When patience grows weary, remember be still. Be static and true. This proves freedom from thoughts in despair, from forgiveness, from you.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dont let the world all around take charge, stand still and listen to your hearts true desire. Mistakes can be unravelled in silence and you don't need forgiveness from anyone but oneself
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 26 November 2013

'When patience grows weary, remember be still. Be static and true. This proves freedom from thoughts in despair, from forgiveness, from you.' A good piece of advice. Liked the note too: 'Mistakes can be unravelled in silence and you don't need forgiveness from anyone but oneself' True!

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