Starred Deeply Into My Eyes Poem by Zen Bojczuk

Starred Deeply Into My Eyes

Rating: 5.0


She was so lovely
Starred deeply into my eyes
Asked me to follow

With blurry vision
I watched her swaying silk walk
Followed where she led

A small dim lit room
She wanted eyes to reveal
To see more clearly

But, not with just me.
Its her profession ~ she's my
ophthalmologist

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 27 September 2007

Zennnnnnn! ! ! ! ! ! You really teased us with this one! Very clever penning...HG: -) xx

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Patricia Gale 25 September 2007

A clincher in the end... well done!

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Elysabeth Faslund 25 September 2007

Oh, yeah...you're good! If you love a poem with a surprise ending, read this one! Good, goodest! xxElysabeth

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Zen Bojczuk

Zen Bojczuk

Philadelphia, PA. USA
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