Sporadic Feelings 03 Poem by Ashraful Musaddeq

Sporadic Feelings 03

Rating: 3.1


1. Roasted heart on table
Sweated baby’s salivary gland
Nascent equation

2. A seamless desire
Ascending balloon flying
Augmented product

3. Dream desire demand
Poet running on runway
Strategic take-off

4. Cyclic order boy
Vicious cycle of worship
Love and lust play-off

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Priyanka Bhowmick 01 June 2009

ur pieces r completely unique....thatz make u different :)

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Surya . 03 June 2009

again wonderfull use of words.nice to read. posted 10 love surya

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roasted heart..a true and strong image for the heart in some of his stages... loved this too 3. Dream desire demand Poet running on runway Strategic take-off excellent passionated poem..10+++++

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Catrina Heart 02 June 2009

well thought out senryus....................10++++++

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Shashendra Amalshan 02 June 2009

yes very unique and different as always...I like your style..nice..10++

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Sandra Martyres 01 June 2009

Interesting Senryus Ashraful.....quite unique too.

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