Annalee Hopkins Somerville


Spiritual Journey - Poem by Annalee Hopkins Somerville

Across from the mountains,
A little house sits in the tree's,
I'm lost in tranquility,
As my soul tries to breath.

White clouds moving slowly,
The breeze a calm still,
I'm caught in the moment,
As my heart starts to heal.

A piece of me,
In the startling blue sky,
As I spread my wings,
My soul starts to fly.

I fly to unknown places,
Where pain and hurt once dwelled,
As the memories flow pass me,
My eyes start to swell.

Tear drops drip slowly,
Down my cheeks,
The wind wipes them dry,
And gives me some peace.

Soaring so free,
Over water and land,
My Spirit Guide gently,
Takes me by my hand.

He shows me what was,
And what's meant to be,
And why my life,
Is so important it seems.

A long soar,
Like the eagle high,
I bow my head,
And I start to cry.

Back on the land,
Across from the tree's,
I began to realize,
What healing means.

It mean's not to forget,
Let the past flow,
Of all the horrors,
One soul had to go.

To take the strengths,
And apply them to life,
Is a valuable lesson,
I've learnt this flight.

Alone in the sunset,
I watch it go down,
When I finally realize,
What peace I have found.

© 2006 Wind Songs Spiritual Poetry


Comments about Spiritual Journey by Annalee Hopkins Somerville

  • Gold Star - 5,396 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (12/30/2014 10:31:00 PM)

    Tear drops drip slowly,
    Down my cheeks,
    The wind wipes them dry,
    And gives me some peace.

    Marvelous trip to journey the poet has offered by heart. Magnificent. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 15,596 Points Lyn Paul (12/30/2014 5:36:00 PM)

    What Peace I have found.........A Spiritual Journey that everyone should read. Thank you (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,825 Points Bernard Snyder (12/30/2014 2:33:00 PM)

    What an amazing poem. Wow. I'm impressed Annalee! Congrats on being chosen as 'poem of the day. This could've easily been chosen as one of the top 50, in my opinion. Outstanding job. A 10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,123 Points Kim Barney (12/30/2014 7:11:00 AM)

    Congratulations on having your poem selected as poem of the day on December 30 for two years in a row! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 184 Points Brian Jani (7/12/2014 8:49:00 AM)

    i enjoyed this poem, it paints a vivid picture in the readers mind. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,205 Points Leslie Philibert (12/30/2013 12:43:00 PM)

    a good poem, and a very original use of the open genitive with tree`s, , , the poet´s secret! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,205 Points Leslie Philibert (12/30/2013 12:23:00 PM)

    Nice hippy feeling, the poem a bit spoiled by the confusion between the plural and genitive in line 2...
    tree`s what? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,758 Points * Sunprincess * (12/30/2013 7:04:00 AM)

    sometimes we all need to take one of these journeys for great appreciation...nice write.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 139 Points Alistair Graham (12/30/2013 2:51:00 AM)

    A poem within a poem (the first line of each stanza)

    Across from the mountains
    White clouds moving slowly
    A piece of me
    I fly to unknown places
    Tear drops drip slowly
    Soaring so free
    He shows me what was
    A long soar
    Back on the land
    It means not to forget
    To take the strengths
    Alone in the sunset (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,897 Points Savita Tyagi (12/30/2012 8:25:00 PM)

    Lovely poem. Enjoyed reading it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,849 Points Tony Karas (12/30/2012 11:13:00 AM)

    Totally awesome! What a magnificent journey! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 68,169 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/30/2009 8:58:00 AM)

    Alone in the sunset,
    I watch it go down,
    When I finally realize,
    What peace I have found......it is eternal joy andhappiness...lovely poemtobe absorbed in life....10

    reqad mine o, lord...prayer... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 32 Points Susan Aparejo (7/25/2009 8:43:00 AM)

    Good poem to tell a life search for happiness. Good for you, you have hug the joy youre searching for. And you diid it more as you wrote it here.10+++. If you have time, pls read my poem too. thanks much (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 25, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, March 29, 2012


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