Sorrow ***** Flight Of Disappointment Poem by Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan

Sorrow ***** Flight Of Disappointment

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(from Lumbia airport CDO to NAIA)

Lift me up high
Above a cloudy sky
Where no cotton balls
Thick and strong
Bumping on the silver wings

At right window side
I am dismayed

Where is the golden sun
The round ocean
The verdant mountain
The landscape of the world
You’ve promise to reveal?

Then breathless heartbeat
Pulsing a nervous twitch
Engine is shaking
silver wings are flapping
Against the lips of murmuring wind
Tires are shrieking
Unnotice

You take me down

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sherrie Tappenden 09 April 2009

Our expectations are so often overly optimistic when faced with the mechanical humdrum of reality. Perhaps disappointment is inevitable in all things.

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Elvira Marchan 08 April 2009

A very describing poem! ! ! ! and touching one.........

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Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan

Rommel Mark Dominguez Marchan

a.k.a. Jetfellow Marchanism
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