Sonnet Of Poems-10: The Territory Of Love Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sonnet Of Poems-10: The Territory Of Love

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I know, I know it very well

The map is never the territory.


My poem is

but a map that

traces the territory

that you reign over...

over the galaxy of my

universes known or unknown.


Like the curved face

Of planet Earth

can be portrayed by

A sequence of plane maps

The faces would be there

sans depth, sans altitude.

Sonnet Of Poems-10: The Territory Of Love
Monday, October 23, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: creativity,love,love and life,poems,poetic expression
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A fnger is needed to point the moon, once the moon is recognized, why bother the finger again?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 23 October 2017

Your poem is a lovely map and this holds amazing territory over this galaxy of mind. Brilliant poem is shared.10

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 October 2017

Thank you Sir for the great remark and the inspiration.

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Akhtar Jawad 23 October 2017

The territory of love maped in this lovely poem is a beautiful poetic expression. Loved this poem.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 October 2017

Thanks Sir for the great remark and the inspiration.

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Sabita Sahoo 26 November 2017

over the galaxy of my universes known or unknown. Loved he essence of the poem. 10++++for the sharing

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soumya 23 November 2017

My poem is but a map that traces the territory that you reign over... over the galaxy of my universes known or unknown. Thanks for shared 10+++++++

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Binayakumar Mohanty 01 November 2017

The faces would be there Sans depth, sans teritory. Are they are Anywhere? Thi is irony sir.still we can not stop tracing the teritory. Nice poem from your heart.Thanks for sharing.10 is less.

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Rajendra Rout 28 October 2017

sir it was a lovely poem.thanks for shairing.......10+++++++

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Sanjukta Sahoo 26 October 2017

My poem is but a map that traces the territory that you reign over... Lovely sharing. 10+++

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 October 2017

Thanks Sanjukta for these great remarks.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra

Subhas Chandra Chakra

Sainkul, Anandapur, Odisha, India
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