Sometimes Poem by Okim Otu

Sometimes

Rating: 5.0


Sometimes;
the sun's to loving radiance
that excites vegetation
can also be the scorching brilliance
that burns the skin
but it's just sometimes

Sometimes;
the rain that excites farmers
during the planting season
can let loose and floods their farms
during the raining season
but it's just sometimes

Sometimes;
the wind that blows us with cool breeze
that refreshes our spirits
can also blow off our roofs
and render us homeless
but it's just sometimes

Sometimes;
the people we entrust with our treasury
will be the first to celebrate our misery
but it's just sometimes

Sometimes;
those we cherished and cared for
are the ones who offend us the most
but it's just sometimes

Sometimes;
A little dreadful
A little wonderful
Is what makes life beautiful
But it's just sometimes.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Causality and duality makes our world complete and beautiful.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 June 2022

A beautiful poem of great insight. So very true. Life is like that.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 22 August 2022

Liked the penultimate stanza the most. A thought provoking poem. Top score.

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Rebecca Navarre 02 July 2022

Wow! .. Again! .. Deeply powerful and deeply moving! .. Such a thoughtful poem and filled with such Hope! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..++++++++++++

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Okim Otu 03 July 2022

Thanks...

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Okim Otu 29 June 2022

Thanks so much for taking out time to comment on my poem, God bless you

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Bharati Nayak 28 June 2022

Sometimes; A little dreadful A little wonderful Is what makes life beautiful But it's just sometimes.---A great insightful poem so nicely penned.

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Okim Otu 29 June 2022

Thanks

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 June 2022

A very well expressed and crafted poem. Top Marks! ! !

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Okim Otu 29 June 2022

Thank you

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