Someday, Under Sunsets So Gold. Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Someday, Under Sunsets So Gold.

Rating: 5.0


Searching for some kinda norm again,
but don't know where to begin. God I
miss you so, I look for you in all I do you
know. Longing to hold you tight, but you're
gone from my sight. I know the Lords angels
are always right, and my heart has nothing
to fight. But the rains beat down so strong at
night, and the winds cry out so child like. And
I know I've got a long, long way to go, with
many rivers, hills, and roads. Before we can
walk hand in hand again, under sunsets so gold.

Sunday, July 24, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: love,grief,life,unity,Christ,heaven
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 25 July 2022

Beautifully inked. Loved it. Nice share.

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Rebecca Navarre 17 August 2022

I also saw how easily this could be mistaken and added notes in hopes to possibly? , , , make it clearer. Many blessings very dear! ..

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Susan Williams 15 August 2022

you captured the torment of missing walking closely with God--it a a horrid feeling, is it not----a million stars, dear poetess

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Rebecca Navarre 17 August 2022

Thank you Dear Susan! .. For your beautifully deep thoughts! .. And yes feeling alone without God was a horrid feeling for me too! .. I wish that on no one! .. However this poem is on loss of a very dear loved one. May God be with you in all you do! .. And Thank you again! ..

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 July 2022

Truly wonderful to read Bravo!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 July 2022

' And the winds cry out so child like', beautiful line from a lovely poem. Top Marks! ! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 July 2022

A beautifully crafted poem embellished with compelling images. Wonderful spiritual write.

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