Searching for some kinda norm again,
but don't know where to begin. God I
miss you so, I look for you in all I do you
know. Longing to hold you tight, but you're
gone from my sight. I know the Lords angels
are always right, and my heart has nothing
to fight. But the rains beat down so strong at
night, and the winds cry out so child like. And
I know I've got a long, long way to go, with
many rivers, hills, and roads. Before we can
walk hand in hand again, under sunsets so gold.
I also saw how easily this could be mistaken and added notes in hopes to possibly? , , , make it clearer. Many blessings very dear! ..
you captured the torment of missing walking closely with God--it a a horrid feeling, is it not----a million stars, dear poetess
Thank you Dear Susan! .. For your beautifully deep thoughts! .. And yes feeling alone without God was a horrid feeling for me too! .. I wish that on no one! .. However this poem is on loss of a very dear loved one. May God be with you in all you do! .. And Thank you again! ..
' And the winds cry out so child like', beautiful line from a lovely poem. Top Marks! ! ! !
A beautifully crafted poem embellished with compelling images. Wonderful spiritual write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Beautifully inked. Loved it. Nice share.