Some Poems Are. Poem by Sandra Feldman

Some Poems Are.

Rating: 5.0

Some poems are
More like a prayer
For us to live
In peace and unity
Under the Stars,
In love and care.

Yes,
Some poems are
Those dreams well thought
Yet not attained,
In violence caught.

What will it take
To live in peace?
To have the harmony
Not violent, beasts
That kill each other.

We are strange creatures
Unclassified,
No longer cavemen
But still,
Uncivilized...

















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COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A beautiful poem depicting how poetry could never be tarnished by the ills of humanity instead it acts as a catalyst to change a broken system.

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Yes, how can we attain peace and harmony when tyrants and authoritarian rule are always there to trample people's rights. They shower the world with their evil acts even in broad daylight for all people to see even our children.

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Another powerful, incisive and touching poem so well presented.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 04 May 2022

I agree with Rose Marie indefenatively Bravo!

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Jayne Davies 04 May 2022

Great poem! Well done. x

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Sandra Feldman 09 May 2022

Thank you, All so much! Ad with your generous collaboration, dear Poets, maybe still it's not too late to change some things in this beloved, crazy World!

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Nabakishore Dash 05 May 2022

No longer cave men, but still uncivilized.Great observation and nice write revered Sandra.

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Wonderful poem… "we are strange…/no longer cave-men/yet uncivilised

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Awesome! ......top score........ : )

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Yes dearest friend Sandra, let us cultivate a civilized world around us through beautiful poetry.

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