Solitaire Poem by RickyLee Barber

Solitaire



One bush grows outside
one or two Rose will prevail
Growth ends with no more.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adeline Foster 18 February 2014

A lovely haiku. Numerically rose should be roses, but that is easily fixed. Simply switch it to: Two or one rose will prevail. The teacher in me will ever prevail. Adeline

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