Smoky Air Poem by SylvaOnyema (SUPER.T) Ubah

Smoky Air

Rating: 5.0


What a machine
That secrets feces of smoke
Smoky Chimneys everywhere
Like a cigarette smoke
Piped into the air

Heartless industry of smoke
Are the bombers delight

Vomiting violent smoke
Tear-gassing
Into laxative lacrimonsal
Fueling a stammering suicidal breath
A gift of macrocadius

O! God's natural vineyard
Has been deflowered
By smoky air and machine

This flag is a smoke
But if you do not want to smoke

You must smoke
In the air.

Smoky Air
Thursday, November 3, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: environment
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
The poet laments about environmental hazards like the use of smoking generator which makes people inhale bad smoke into their nose. He also kicks against terrorism which destroys both lives and properties.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvaonyema Uba 21 January 2017

O! God's natural vineyard Has been deflowered By smoky air and machine This shows the environment has been greatly polluted by incessant emission of gas in the air.

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Sylvaonyema Uba 02 January 2017

...you must smoke in the air. The poet depicts an ugly situation whereby smoky conditions are so rampart that you can help but get entangled in it directly or indirectly.

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