Slow And Slow Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

Slow And Slow

Rating: 5.0


What love hast thou inspired
In loud laments I sing
The goddess of night
With the tinkle of music
Slow and slow
The book of love
The visions slow
For yet another night
In the nest of love
Like Heer* adamant
For eternal breathe
In the open skies

Hidden is not
Once you wear
The cloak of love
Like a monk
To the monastery
Step in slow

The beloved in dance
For the body bends
In the distant wilderness
Love celebrates
Sans rituals
When the costume slips
Down the mounds
The silk of her love
The zephyr in the night
Under the moon
Lit the fire of love
With vintage wine
And her bending body

(*Heer was the legendry beloved of Ranjha, a love story)
16/1/2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Nicely done... I like this great write KRISTA

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sumaira .....ir 16 January 2009

Nicely writin... It shows your good taste....

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Nice pattern.. I like the line that reads with the tinkle of music that is nice.. Great piece Krista

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Sebastine Humaemo 24 January 2009

love mixed with romance and care seen in your lines.....slow and slow lines makes me to involve.....quite and calm reading your lines my heart goes for a walk...sebastine

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Anjali Sinha 22 January 2009

Sans rituals slipped the costume down the mounds, silk and the zephyr lit the fire of love with the vintage wine, for another night in the nest of love she gave in at last slow slow the visions show to the depth of your love amidst the tinkle of music for eternal breath in the open skies

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Anjali Sinha 22 January 2009

nicely penned ++10 anjali

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 20 January 2009

Slowness is the beauty of love.... Love dances in ecstasy in this poem.... Beautiful Sadiq......10/10.

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