Slovo Ljubavi (The Word Of Love) - For Francesca Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Slovo Ljubavi (The Word Of Love) - For Francesca

Rating: 5.0


Here I am
nailed to this hated bed

with the bright shiny
nails of cancer.

Death smiles
& wants to take me

as his
bride

but I
remain unfaithful
to him

elope with life
(if only for this night)

spending golden moments
as if there were no

tomorrow.

I fling my laughter
in his big stupid grinning face

as if he thinks
this is all a human is

a something to be
taken.

I hope to sneak out
when he is not looking
or looking the other way
before he discovers me
alive in your heart

(untouchable)

my memory
safe in your memory

so that to kill me
he will have to kill you too.

So beware my friend
you will become

a marked man

& Death
cheated of my soul

will hunt you
down

and rip me from
your heart

to finish the job.

But I know
you will
hide me

hide me
among your words

little seeds
of me

that will propagate

so that Death
would have to kill the whole world.

I laugh to see
the little seedlings

of me
sprout in other

minds
other voices

see my laughter
blossom

on a strange
tongue

unknown to me
but known

Death furiously
glaring.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Original Unknown Girl 02 July 2008

Gosh Donall, you really know how to slay us with your words don't you? This is gorgeous, though it shouldn't be, should it? So glad that you played death at his own game (and won!) HG: -) xx

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Flora Gillingham 16 May 2008

Painful but playful too, cheating death of the satisfaction of his triumph. As Allie says, hugely uplifting. Fx

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Scarlett Treat 16 May 2008

Defiant to the end and beyond...your words living in the soul of others...just has to be one of the most profound statements I have ever read as to why we, as writers, write! Our own piece of immortality, the bits of our souls that live on, defying Death! Wonderful, wonderful writing.

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Alison Cassidy 15 May 2008

You use metaphor to stunning effect in this painfully arresting poem about death and disease and the timeless power of the creative force. You personalize death in order to be able to deal with him and his '...bright shiny nails of cancer'. It would seem that the depths of a life can be the most powerful springboard for its creative brilliance. I am moved by your story and uplifted by your determination. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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