Sixth Sense Comfort....Part 1 Poem by mithilesh yadav
Sixth Sense Comfort....Part 1
It's a blessing may be some time, sometime it is like a crush………..
Some time it really hurts to be unsafe ……
Some time it really hurts to be in society……
Oh god I feel someone looking at me, staring at me and like challenging me ……
To safe myself from his lusty eyes, to safe myself from this dangerous view…….
Every time I be alone and may be some time in hundreds of all…….
Those eyes still try to entrap my safety and comfort………
May be those eyes think I am not watching, but what the hell of this sixth sinse…….
Oh god you have given me this sense, it always feel eyes staring at me and like challenging me ……
To safe myself from these lusty eyes, to safe myself from this dangerous view…….
Sometime friends some time neighbours some time even someone in relation…….
Many a times those eyes are attacking many a times those eyes are scarring ……..
Many a time they test my gesture, they test my patience and my ignorance……..
Oh god you have given me this sense, it always feel eyes staring at me and like challenging me ……
To safe myself from these lusty eyes, to safe myself from this dangerous view…….
Oh god could you have given a kind view to those eyes…..
You could have made them understand the pain we feel from there lust and greed………..
Could you ever be able to change those views, those eyes to respect and honour us……….
Oh god you have given me this sense, it always feel eyes staring at me and like challenging me ……
To safe myself from these lusty eyes, to safe myself from this dangerous view…….
Those eyes to be able to recognise the mothers and sisters and daughters in the flesh they view…
Those eyes to feel the love for every mother, sister, daughter ….like their own they love………
Those eyes to feel the pain of every mother, sister, daughter ….. like their own they feel…..
Oh god you have given me this sense, it always feel eyes staring at me and like challenging me ……
To safe myself from these lusty eyes, to safe myself from this dangerous view…….
A very powerful n heartfelt write from women's point of view. Sixth sense can indeed be a test for a woman. A10.
Oh god you have given me this sense, it always feel eyes staring at me and like challenging me …… To safe myself from these lusty eyes, to safe myself from this dangerous view……. Sixth sense is the sense of super ego and super ego is the seat of God. Sixth sense is the voice of God. In Hindi it's suresh and in Urdu it's sarosh. when we are talking to God in fact we are talking to our super ego. I was so much pleased to read a poem from a poem by a Gorakhpuri poet, as I was born at Gorakhpur and I am a graduate from Gorakhpur University. Mithilesh Yadav while looking at others' women we forget some one else might be looking our women with the same dirt. You have written a wonderful poem. I am sur it's suresh.
To safe myself from these lusty eyes, to safe myself from this dangerous view…… a nice concept. but i hve many questions.. what is this exactly. write more about the sixth sense concept. you want to educate the girls of your society about it. how will u do it. sixth sense comfort....... what are your aims in achieving it. how wil u do it. what are the teaching components. would u please write about it. thankyou for your attempt to begin with something very new. tony
It is believed that every person has a SIXTH SENSE which enables to feel him or her any eye on him or by any distance....... So the concept gave me an idea to unfold a mass education programme of SIXTH SENSE COMFORT...... Through which we as a good human beings and men on earth PROMISE ourselves and to the humanity to provide SIXTH SENSE COMFORT to all our great ladies in society..... Let us make it a big campaign educate our younger boys from 8 th to 12 th std boys to ensure the SIXTH SENCE COMFORT to all the girls in our society....... This poem series will be my efforts to make this concept a revolution..... Request All seniors to add there valuable comment on this.....
Just the other way...... Sir I wanna this concept to be taught to our boys.... and educate and make them responsible to be able to provide a SIXTH SENSE COMFORT to all girls in society and treat them equally as they do it to there own mother, sister and daughters......... ... And as far as teaching components is concern I am in process of collecting those components.............. I am selecting best verses of vedas which teaches to respect women power and other such examples from holy books..... also need all possible comments and add ups from allmseniors like u here........ thanx for reading and showing intrest......
A good work u have done....keep it up.....amazingly narrated.....thank you for sharing :)
thanx mam..... wana some inputs if u would have anything to add on this topic any time now or in future...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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It is believed that every person has a SIXTH SENSE which enables to feel him or her any eye on him or by any distance....... So the concept gave me an idea to unfold a mass education programme of SIXTH SENSE COMFORT ...... Through which we as a good human beings and men on earth PROMISE ourselves and to the humanity to provide SIXTH SENSE COMFORT to all our great ladies in society..... Let us make it a big campaign educate our younger boys from 8 th to 12 th std boys to ensure the SIXTH SENCE COMFORT to all the girls in our society....... This poem series will be my efforts to make this concept a revolution..... Request All seniors to add there valuable comment on this......