Sin Poem by Archana Prabahar

Sin

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Committing a mistake is common
but continuing it is the sin
Prefer not to continue rather
correct the deeds of wrong
Walk through the path of right
to reach the goal of success
Else the rocks of sin will hide
the breeze of good to pass by
And hence remain as barrier
in every deeds of efforts...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Reetessh Sabrr 26 December 2008

Else the rocks of sin will hide the breeze of good to pass by its resonating something i experienced recently so its a right timing to read ur poem

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 12 November 2007

Rocks of sin and breeze of good are nice. Thank you.

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Sim Dan 12 November 2007

good observation - well said

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