Silent Tears Poem by maria rahman

Silent Tears

Rating: 4.5


I was standing on the beach

Looking towards the dancing waves

Striking the rocks…

Wondered!

What they can do with those huge pieces of stones!

I gazed and gazed,

For a long time

And a surge of little thoughts came to my mind!

Even if they can do nothing,

Cant even scatter at once,

But they try something!

They actually try...

Try to make the world know something,

But who cares?

Who wants to listen?

What they want to say!

What they want to share!

Who cares?

Who peeps into their sighs hidden in their strikes?

Behind these dancing surges,

Behind their roary melody,

There is a sigh!

Which says

Do listen to me,

I wana share!

O man! nobody cares

Not a single one!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Menime Soul..'d' Ugliloner 27 November 2011

Liked the way of conveying message in a poetic way...good one.

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Faheem Shahzad 22 August 2008

The moment I read a piece from this poem (when u shared earlier) , I thought this is amazing... Now when it's complete, it looks awesome :) good effort... keep it up.

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And a surge of little thoughts came to my mind! Even if they can do nothing, Cant even scatter at once, But they try something! They actually try... Try to make the world know something, ShabasH larki! ! ! 10.0

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