She Condoled Poem by Rehan Hyder

She Condoled

Rating: 5.0


Awful! she said
in this “awful”
I could feel quivering hands
On my chest as if fumbling
For right thread in etui of life

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aamnah Akhtar 11 June 2009

coldplay... tidal wave... outer space... sadness... love... poetry... life... ah... goes a bit beyond the fourth dimension...

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 22 June 2009

very enthralling as most of your pieces...

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 22 June 2009

very entharlling as most of your peices are.....a flustered mind entangled in the desperate act of fulfilling unjust desires? ? ?

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Saadat Tahir 13 June 2009

awesome its so deep and yet almost candid all things good...go their way surmise....bemoan...invent..... yet to each a measure lurks great poetry cheers an ten

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Ashraful Musaddeq 11 June 2009

Beautiful poem

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a very clear feeling and image presented in your passionated poem..10++++

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