Shadow Of A Lost Soul Poem by Scarlet .....

Shadow Of A Lost Soul

Rating: 5.0


a shadow
just darkness
upon a wall
it is all that remains
of a lost soul
living life upon the walls
the darkness blends in
unnoticed
unseen
watching the world
as if it’s a movie
that’s how it is
to the darkness
to that lost soul
its all predictable
its reruns
just with different actors
and let me tell you
the plot is thin

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 19 October 2007

A melancholy piece, concisely penned. I like your last couplet in particular. A good example of 'less is more'. love, Allie xxxx

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Uloia Norris Moore 18 October 2007

I will always believe. The cotext emotion expresses by you Thank for the vast sums of your mind so known here.

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Red Blooded Black Hearted 17 October 2007

Wow, that had a real emotional beat to it... I love it.

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