Sexes Of The Utensils Poem by Lazarus Knix

Sexes Of The Utensils

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Skin of tarnished silver,
Arched forehead and
Welcoming handle,
His teeth, Four prongs,
Brandished like serpent fangs.
Beside him, sits his
Oval headed
Sister, Her empty palate,
Waiting to be filled.
Resting upon
My dinner table-
A fork and spoon.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lazarus Knix 16 July 2009

No message. Just making the fork a male, and the spoon a female. Also, if you have criticism, please tell me WHY you have it, So I may fix the poem (if the concern is valid)

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Jahmari Thomas 16 July 2009

its a nice messgae that ur tryin to convey however its not fufilling its true potential!

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