Senryu: The Gift Poem by David Wood

Senryu: The Gift

Rating: 5.0


Now is the moment
To find where the homeless are
And make their Christmas.

Friday, December 24, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: homelessness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
5-7-5 syllable Senryu. Don't just pray about them, go and feed them!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 24 December 2021

simply bravo! my dear David Bravo!

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Nabakishore Dash 25 December 2021

Great attitude sir.

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Nabakishore Dash 25 December 2021

Merry Xmas.Great attitude.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 28 December 2021

Wonderful thoughts, in the true spirit of Christmas.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 December 2021

Yes, human beings should explore their whereabouts and their happiness! An insightful little poem.

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Anjandev Roy 25 December 2021

Absolutely true and perfect.....thank u, dear poet...

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Sandra Feldman 25 December 2021

Kindness and consideration fit you well. As your poetry reflects and beautifully tells.

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Kostas Lagos 25 December 2021

P-e-r-f-e-c-t senryu! ! !

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