Senryu ~ Newness Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu ~ Newness

Rating: 4.8


a new joyful song
fresh fragrance of the flowers
an old path obscured

green leaves turn to grey
when worry enters the head
heart remains unrest

Saturday, January 22, 2022
Topic(s) of this poem: senryu
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 22 January 2022

this poem has brilliance

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Poetic Sky 24 January 2022

Perfect poem.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 24 January 2022

New is ever fresh but old always has its antique beauty......lovely poem Asimji

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Nabakishore Dash 23 January 2022

Green leaves------------unrest.Absolutely true.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 22 January 2022

A brilliant and thought provoking senryu adorned with great metaphors and images.

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Suzon Albert 22 January 2022

No worry is no living, to handle it well is what required.

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