Senryu Chain: Life Cycle Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Senryu Chain: Life Cycle

Rating: 5.0


Evening shadows
play last symphony to say
goodbye to the sun.

candles set to dance
for another chilling night
under silent moon.

life passing away
between realism and dreams
like the shifting scenes.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 07 January 2021

Awesome imagery captures the feel of evening exquisitely. How beautiful! ! ! !

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Kostas Lagos 07 January 2021

This chain has wrapped us for good! Excellent

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Madan P 07 January 2021

A chain of pearl nicely put around the neck of this life.

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Poetic Sky 06 January 2021

A day frim life nicely chained in Senryu. Class poem.

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Darren Jkoeryo 06 January 2021

DJ liked it. When darkness appears people tend to fear but life is not so bad. It goes on with positive and negative feelings.

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Deepak S S 09 January 2021

All three are in sync and wonderfully written.

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Suzon Albert 09 January 2021

Excellent Senryu. Great write.

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Sharad Bhatia 08 January 2021

Very beautiful and heart touching senryu. Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful senryu

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Ricky Manhatten 07 January 2021

Goodbye and welcome note

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 07 January 2021

Full of exuberance. I enjoyed Sir

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