Evening shadows
play last symphony to say
goodbye to the sun.
candles set to dance
for another chilling night
under silent moon.
life passing away
between realism and dreams
like the shifting scenes.
DJ liked it. When darkness appears people tend to fear but life is not so bad. It goes on with positive and negative feelings.
Very beautiful and heart touching senryu. Thankyou for sharing such a beautiful senryu
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Awesome imagery captures the feel of evening exquisitely. How beautiful! ! ! !