Senryu 4 (Dandelion Fields) Poem by Lillian Susan Thomas

Senryu 4 (Dandelion Fields)

Rating: 5.0


dandelion fields
my child blows white down skyward,
'Are we making clouds? '

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
, aryaindia 28 April 2009

Good question with innumerable answers........god knows it all.........arya

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Thomas Donnelly 22 January 2013

Reading this poem I smile a wide beaming grin A ten out of ten

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 June 2009

Marvelous piece.

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Antonio Liao 08 May 2009

the union of the spirited world and the immortal elements comes to touch in the poem you made....a 10+++++++ thank you and God bless

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Susan Jarvis 03 May 2009

Nature linked to human nature - your indelible image is as perfect as this poetic form gets - beautiful. S :)

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a lovely one...the little one...the questions they ask..the amasement they skow..please read my 'the natural learner'

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