Self Critisization Gone Extreme Poem by Brandy Bee

Self Critisization Gone Extreme

Rating: 3.5


Hiding in my hoody


Hiding in my hair


Hiding the secrets I must never share


Why have i become this way?


To me it isn't fair


Isis my goddess speak to me


Tell me what to do to make me feel free


All this pain and all these tears


All the hiding from my fears


Make me beautiful And make me strong


Make me forget the past Id like to move on


Speak to me


and help me see


This is a Plea


So mote it be!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 16 June 2015

It's a beautiful poem that eloquently speaks your mind. Well written. I think the word 'Critisization' in the title could better be 'Criticism'.

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