Secret Communion Poem by Sadiqullah Khan

Secret Communion

Rating: 3.1


The messenger has brought the news
Love in the heart has aches of longing
Firefly of the night for the nightingale
In the day for the song in sweet tongue
Love is to all the rays of the shine
Reflection on the mirror when in the eyes
On her palm from strangers is so hidden

Open is the door on the front in the yard
For the secrete love shared watching mist
Damsel though you call her of white cheek
Comfort in your zones has she bestowed
State of nature is where she too belongs
Her sign is the flower yellow plucked
On your way that reveals true her love
7/8/2009

Friday, August 7, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: love and art
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i think my vote still there, but the poem is increased in it's beauty...loved each line in it as it carried very wonderful meanings...

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Sarwar Chowdhury 07 August 2009

great wording! 'watching mist'--> superb! ! 10+

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Ejaz Khan 07 August 2009

Well, well Sadiqullah, that's a great write, very uplifting, full of promise!

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