Sea Poem by Shelvakumari Thachayil

Sea



Mind is an ocean
Waves always on the top
Calm at the bottom
Even strange events always
Every picture of faces
Reflecting hearts beats
Giant creatures like faith
Swallowing all happiness
All the proposes made with long time
Disposes within seconds
Something like tunami
Entirely pulling out
Winds and breeze
Touches all moods
Yet hope inside
For the new era
Entering everywhere
Without restrictions
Overflowing sometimes
Nobody can control
Lost somewhere
Then last the life...

Sea
Saturday, April 28, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: sea
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 28 April 2018

An imaginative poem. I'm so pleased that you focussed on the mind. It is my favourite subject. Overall, I think your poem is to be commended with ++++10.

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