Savita Ji's Golden Years And Rm Ji's Hindi Version No Difference Poem by me poet yeps poet

Savita Ji's Golden Years And Rm Ji's Hindi Version No Difference

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1353SAVITA Ji'S GOLDEN AND RM Ji'S HINDI VERSION NO DIFFERENCE

I don't know
what to add
stalwarts have already
done her the honours

and you Sir
in equal measure

can I ever say lesser
or much more
the world you
both does adore

YOUR PATIENCE DILIGENCE AND MARKED TRANSLATION
is what makes Poet Poet Me
say to both

Sabaash Well done

ENGLISH VERSION AND HINDI ENDEAR
INEQUAL MEASURE
I SHAN'T SAY FIFTY FIFTY

BUT HUNDRED MAY BE

Thanks for the English version

Hindi mine you know
it is ''tootie fruity''

LOLji

RM AND SAVITA Ma'am

Take the world like a storm
your Retirement is on

Mine by now
I am forlorn
GOLDEN LIFE HAS GONE
No one knows
whether I shall see tomorrows dawn

But don't mourn

Monday, July 29, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: lifespan,poetic expression,life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
MY HELLOOOOOOOS AND SLAAAAMS MERE BHAIAOUR AAP KOE MADAM
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Savita Tyagi 03 August 2019

Thank you Poet Poet. I had read part of your poetry in comment section. But this full poem is just amazing and so full of life. I do do hope our golden years are as lively as your poem styles.

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Aniruddha Pathak 30 July 2019

Can't be disputed, the original poem and the translation. But when the feedback gets longer than the poem? I think it is the exuberance of the old man who means well.

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Julia Luber 29 July 2019

wize and intriguing; has a mysterious commanding authority to it

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