Sadness In The Rain Poem by Tinus Erasmus

Sadness In The Rain

Rating: 5.0


Seeing you in that way
Taking my breath away,
Your pain is deep,
Your emotions are weak,
Crying in the rain
Trying to kill the pain,
Free your heart
To feel my love,

We walked a long long road together,
We will love eachother
Forever and ever
Never again
Feel the pain
Nothing will feel the same
When our hearts change,
Stopping to restrain,
Our hearts from love,
Fearing the pain.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 08 May 2011

Great poem. Very well described. Great imagery and style. Excellent stuff. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box by typing the name of the poem if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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