Sadness, Emptiness, Confusion Built Up Inside Me Poem by Ricky Baker

Sadness, Emptiness, Confusion Built Up Inside Me

Rating: 5.0


Silence builds an awful wreckage of a girl
It feeds on loneliness and creates a void
Gray shadows haunt and torment and torture
A teenager is stricken and destroyed

There is no sound of laughter or happiness here
The little one has thrown in the towel today
Somber, melancholy moods decay the soul
It is futile to hope and dream and pray

Emptiness builds a home in this woman
In this girl, this child where hollows have bred
A deepening sea of nowhereness consumes
And eats away at every connecting thread

Confusion feeds like a savage inside her,
Leaving nothing considered worthy remains
Destined to walk through life less ordinary
Alone, exiled, different and disdained.

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dance angel 08 March 2010

i like this poem keep the good work going 2 thumbs up

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Ricky Baker

Ricky Baker

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