Rubaiyat - My Deeds Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Rubaiyat - My Deeds

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This dust will surely hide our body, one day.
Yet our good deeds will remain in this world.
Do not offer me any drink to attain immortality
Millions of bubbles are waiting for their turn.

Wednesday, October 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death,rubaiyat
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 22 October 2015

Really wonderful, I love in full.

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M Asim Nehal 23 October 2015

Thx Mishraji

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T Rajan Evol 22 October 2015

Wonderfully thought Rubaiyat. God bless u.

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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2015

Thx much TRE

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Rajnish Manga 22 October 2015

Thanks for this beautiful philosophical poem. The style reminds me of Omar Khayyam. Excellent work.

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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2015

Tkx Much Rajnishji

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Sanjukta Nag 22 October 2015

The philosophy of life always expressed through your poem marvellously.100

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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2015

TU SN

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Loke Kok Yee 22 October 2015

a beautiful read takes me to another world far away Tanks Asim-10+10

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M Asim Nehal 22 October 2015

Thanks much LKY

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