Roots Will Run Deep Poem by Lazarus Knix

Roots Will Run Deep

Rating: 4.8


Roots will run deep,
If a heart maintains
One unbroken beat-

If when a man speaks-
His tongue is contained-
Roots will run deep

Roots will run deep
If one can explain
Their thoughts within deeds

And when one weeps
For another, like veins
Roots will run deep.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jesse Soto 12 August 2009

When one loves another, the roots will truly run deep! Great effort into this and I suggest just simply modifying the repition and give this a tweak for good rhythm and pace. Other than that, great job!

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