Riptide Poem by Susan Lacovara

Riptide

Rating: 5.0


I dip my toes,
cautiously, now
Into the wake that was your wave
That once unseen,
washed over me
knocking me from my balance,
nearly drowning me
in the incredible undertow
Of you...

I steady myself
on the shifting sand
scorching sometimes, frigid, others...
And brave what could be
a tsunami of emotion
swelling
as another tidal wave
Of YOU...
Comes quick to shore.
I hold my breath
and fall under the ocean blue
Of Your eyes...

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
(10/08/13) I would have learned to swim in your love...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anthony Burkett 02 February 2014

These words remind me of a love lost by my being me... Too much... Too soon...

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Nicholas Garcia 23 October 2013

Dug it a lot. Certainly liked the joining of love and the ocean. Especially liked the first few lines. Good stuff.

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