Reveal Yourmind Please Poem by Prem Nizar Hameed

Reveal Yourmind Please

Rating: 5.0


Reveal your mind please
Telescope discovers now
Even Milky Way;
But is there any scope how
To find your love on my way


(Syllables: 5-7-5-7-7)

Friday, August 14, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 October 2020

A lovely Tanka on love.......10

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Chinedu Dike 24 August 2020

Beautiful love poem nicely put together. A perceptive write that resonates with literally conviction.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 14 August 2020

Ohh sensational and romantic in a brill way! Kudos! Plz do read and comment your thoughts on my newest prose titled, " face veils/face masks same thing " as it fosters an understanding of the shared veiling practice btw east and west since history. I have received comments for it in my inbox though they don't show up under my poem yet.

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Aarzoo Mehek 14 August 2020

A good question we keep asking ourselves often. Wish we had such instrument to find love. New thought. Compliments.10++

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