Rescure Poem by Linn icedawan

Rescure

Rating: 5.0


If the surge of river
Can clean your bloody body
Would you like
To stay at the bank for sometime
 
If the boundless of snow
Can cover your dirty body
Would you like
To stand in the mountain for a moment
 
If the blue of sky
Can carve your glory name
Would you like
To fly around the sky for a minute

If the green of prairie
Can whisk off your pain in heart
Would you like
To gallop on the prairie without pause
 
How can I save
your grilling heart
If all of above
For you in vain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 08 July 2011

Great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. I really liked and rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4.

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